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About Me Member Lyrics Writer Jordan Micheal Besmer17/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 10 Months
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If only my heart would heal....?!?

Mon Oct 5, 2009, 4:03 AM
Fucking life is the worst. cant get her out of my head. ruining my writings. i think im about ready to quit. this may be my last writing for a very long time...good-bye!!!1

  • Mood: Suffering
  • Listening to: the voices inside my head
  • Reading: the world around me for inspiration
  • Watching: my life go by, need a way out
  • Playing: the poeple that mess with emotions
  • Eating: the oxygen around me
  • Drinking: the beauty of nature

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i write love songs, some songs, some hoping and wishing, and some happy,some love songs, they are the only things i can write about, well unless its something like an internal conflict within oneself, and i write stories, fantasy stories to be exact, i love music, been singing for 10 years, drumming for 8, and i love my running, and i cook, and dance writing for 2 year

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: connecticute, northwestern corner
  • deviantWEAR sizing preference: medium
  • Interests: basketball, singing, drumming, dancing, writing songs and stories
  • Favourite movie: the pursuit of happiness
  • Favourite band or musician: none
  • Favourite genre of music: all but country and some classical
  • Favourite artist: JeweliaIam
  • Favourite poet or writer: lenny bruce, lengston ughes
  • Favourite photographer: JeweliaIam
  • Favourite style of art: song, musical, abstract
  • Operating System: windows vista XP
  • MP3 player of choice: ipod touch
  • Favourite game: fable the lost chapters
  • Favourite cartoon character: samuri jack ;P
  • Personal Quote: you can never be one person, so show all of you sides to the world!
  • Tools of the Trade: Paper, Pencil, Pen, Eraser, My heart, My soul, My mind, Inspiration

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Comments


:iconsunshin317:
Thanks for the faves :) I'm reading your writing and it's great :D

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Say the brass is the man on the couch in front of the TV and he's saying "Woman, make me a sandwich!"
:iconstrife7roxas13:
Thanks for the fave!

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"My soul, corrupted by vengeance, hath endured torment to find the end of the journey, in my own salvation and your eternal slumber."

~Genesis Rhapsodos
:iconoro91:
Thanks for the fav! :)

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Ori.

"There are just some kind of men who are so busy worrying about the next world that they never learn to live in this one." Miss Maudie, To Kill A Mockingbird.
:iconsunshin317:
Thanks for the watch! I like your gallery, you've got some real talent there :D

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Say the brass is the man on the couch in front of the TV and he's saying "Woman, make me a sandwich!"
:icontruelovebeliever36:
do you really think i have talent? wow, thanks a whole bunches of oats, haha that made my week, i would love to see any opinions you have on my "works" then, if you want to make any, and you are welcome for the watch

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ShadowViolet

Excerpt from "Bottomless Love?"

I'm falling to fast
I'm falling way to hard
This is higher than i thought it was before
Baby, you better catch me
For if you don't
I might hit rock bottom
and i won't survive
:iconprincessofheartbreak:
Thank you for the favs and the watch.

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“ ‘I love you’ I whispered”
“ ‘You are my life now,’ He answered simply.
“Breakfast time!” He said

--Twilight
Its not a love story,
Its dinner!
:icontruelovebeliever36:
you are very welcome, you have an amazing writing gift better than mine, i choose you because of that, to see what a real writer's writings are like, so really its thank you

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ShadowViolet

Excerpt from "Bottomless Love?"

I'm falling to fast
I'm falling way to hard
This is higher than i thought it was before
Baby, you better catch me
For if you don't
I might hit rock bottom
and i won't survive
:iconprincessofheartbreak:
uhm o.o your welcome^^

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“ ‘I love you’ I whispered”
“ ‘You are my life now,’ He answered simply.
“Breakfast time!” He said

--Twilight
Its not a love story,
Its dinner!
:iconhomsar88:
thanks for the favourite!
Love songs eh?
Thats somewhat uncanny for a man your age to be up to. Well it IS 2009 and it is charming and vexing for you to write such things.
I love literature, romance, Shakespearean dialect, and poetry and prose.
A certain quote from me is;
"If writing prowess is what you need, go write until the fingers bleed."

I strongly believe in that philossophy and love to critique young writers.
Maybe we'll meet again because of that one day hopefully. Writing is truly a gift and very lovely.


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ROCK. MY. HOLE.

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